Heads Up – Part Five

Whoop whoop! It’s finally heeeeeere! Are you excited? Because I am! ?

And we all know what Madi being excited means. ?

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DRAMA AND CLIFFHANGERS. ?

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Part One
Part Two
Part Three
Part Four

From part four:

“Fine then,” Cécile shrugs unhappily. “Delaney, I’m really sorry, but there’s been a mistake. You’re not supposed to be here but in Tennessee.”

Chloe lets out a heart-breaking gasp, Ellie’s eyes widen, and the blood drains from my face in horror.

Busted.

Delaney’s POV

“What?” I finally say when I can force words out of my mouth. “What?” I repeat, more sharp and angry than I intend to to hurl at Cécile. “What do you mean, I’m not supposed to be here? My sister is here. I have waited months to be here. I belong here.”

Cécile shakes her head sadly. “Oh, Del, I’m so sorry — there’s just — been a mistake. Your actual adopters are wondering where you are and called that Uber driver who drove you here. He had the wrong address.”

My heart burns at her words. This is the right address. This is fate. No one can keep me from my sister. If they dare try, I’ll knock them so high their clothes are out of fashion when they come back down.

I clench my fists. “I’m not leaving Taryn.”

By now, everyone else is surrounding us in shock, much to Chloe’s I-was-supposed-to-be-guarding-this surprise.

“What?” Taryn asks, her voice so small and quivering it hurts my angry heart. “You’re leaving?”

“No!” I shout. “I’m never leaving you again. I promise.” I harden my gaze. “And it’s a promise I intend to keep.”

Cécile furrows her eyebrows in worry, exasperated. “Guys, please — don’t get your hopes up. There’s been a grave mistake.”

“You sound as if you want us to be separated!” Taryn cries angrily.

“No!” Cécile gasps in horror. “That’s not what I want at all!”

I march up to Cécile and stare her down. “Then fix it,” I hiss in a menacing threat.

Cécile backs up in more worry. “I — I’ll — see what I can do,” she relents. She scurries away and out the bedroom door, and I turn back to Taryn.

“I’m not letting this happen again,” I vow. “I don’t care who those adopters think they are. I’ve got this under control, okay? Don’t worry about it.”

When Taryn’s eyes fill with tears, my heart hurts even more. I wish I could say something to reassure her, but I can’t. I don’t have things under control. And if there’s anything I hate, it’s feeling helpless.

When Josefina puts a comforting hand on Taryn’s shoulder and she manages to blink her wet eyes and keep from crying, jealousy pulses through me. I’m supposed to be making Taryn feel better. I’m her sister.

I angrily shove past them both and make a beeline for the door. I stride determinedly out of the room with my mind on a mission and a pace to match it. Whoever Cécile is going to talk to is about to get a piece of my mind, too.

I find Cécile outside the door in the hallway, having a very desperate phone call with someone.

“But we don’t want her to leave!” Cécile cries. She closes her eyes in misery for several moments as the other line speaks.

“Give me that,” I order, snatching the phone out of Cécile’s hand before she has a chance to comprehend.

“Hello?” I shout into the phone.

“Hello?” Echoes the other voice in confusion. “Who is this?”

“This is Taryn’s sister, the one who is staying here no matter what you or anyone else says. Just who do you think you are?”

“I’m your temporary owner. You may call me Madison.”

May?” I repeat in scornful mocking. “How about I call you Heartless Cruel Jerk no matter what? You’re not taking me away from my sister!”

“Don’t be disrespectful,” Madison orders. “I received a call from your adopters this morning and they are worried sick about your arrival. A girl adopted you to give to her little sister, whose birthday is in less than two days and has her heart set on an American Girl doll and an American Girl doll only.”

“Well, they’re not getting this doll,” I decide. “Tell them I said they’re dumb. That’s right, you can quote me. ‘Delaney Danger Clark says you’re dumb.’ If they don’t believe me, give them this home address and I’ll say it to their face. But I’m not going to their home address.”

I think I hear muffled laughing from the other line, and I wonder why on earth Madison thinks she has the audacity to think this is funny. “This isn’t funny!” I scream into the phone. “You don’t understand!”

“I’m sorry,” Madison lowers her voice. “I’m really, really sorry. But I didn’t adopt you, and I don’t have the rights to keep you here. I could if I would. I’m so sorry.”

“That’s it?!” I cry. “You’re sorry?! That’s all you have to say? I’m just leaving? You’re tearing me away from my sister?”

“I’m sorry,” she mutters. “Hand the phone back to Cécile now.”

“No!” This conversation is not finished. “No, I’m not doing that. I’m not leaving Taryn. You can’t make me. I don’t care who you are. I don’t care who my adopters are. What part of I’m not leaving do you not understand?!”

“I want you to know,” Madison says slowly. “I’ve tried everything I could to get you to stay here.” She swallows. “Please go pack. You leave in half an hour.”

And then she hangs up.

My trembling hand shakily pulls the phone away from my ear in horrified shock. I slowly turn my head to face the crowd I’ve attracted now, and Taryn is staring at me in the most heartbreaking way I’ve ever seen. I can’t take it.

For the first time in a long time, I burst into tears, and this time it’s Taryn who pulls me into a hug. I cry into her shoulder as my own shake with the violence of my quaking sobs.

I realize what I’m doing and pull away quickly, hurriedly swiping the back of my hand over my eyes as my cheeks flame in embarrassment.

“I — I better pack,” I gasp, swiping my eyes again. I push through the others and through the door. It hurts too much to look at Taryn’s miserably desolate face any longer.

I don’t have much. The moment I stuff my PJ’s, toothbrush, and toothpaste into my black shoulder bag, I’m packed. When I turn around, Taryn is standing there.

“Del,” she whispers softly. She no longer looks so desolate. “Everything is going to be okay.”

I don’t know if she is trying to comfort me or herself, but she’s telling the biggest lie I’ve ever heard. “No, it’s not,” I snap. “Nothing is okay.”

Taryn looks down at what she is holding in her hands, and I see a book with a red ribbon bookmark.

She presses it into my hands and then looks up to meet my gaze. “Keep your head up, Del,” she mutters. “I’m doing the same.”

I force a wry smile and accept the book from her. “‘Keep your head up’ — that sounds like a prettier version of something I’d say.” Then I frown. “But this is the hardest thing in my entire life — like a mean tease, being able to see you only to be ripped away again. It’s only making it worse.”

Taryn listens quietly, having never heard me freely speak my feelings before. I lower my voice to a mumble. “I can’t think of any cool quote or epic mic drop to help me make it through this one.” Despite how unlike it is for me to let her, Taryn sees me cry as tears slip down my cheeks. “I can’t keep my head up,” I whisper.

Taryn smiles sweetly at me. “But Del — that’s just it. God will help you keep your head up if you just let Him.”

I pause, unsure of what to say to that. “You believe in God?”

“Yes? I think it would be obvious. We pray over the food, we have family Bible reading time — how could you not tell?”

“I could tell something was different about you than the last time I saw you. But… I didn’t know you were actually into all this…” I look down at the book she’s put into my hands which I now realize is a Bible. “… religious fanaticism.”

“This isn’t religious fanaticism,” Taryn tells me. “Jesus didn’t die for religious fanatics. It’s about God coming down from Heaven and touching our hearts.”

I don’t know what to say to that, so I don’t say anything. I just pull her into a hug again with my other arm, knowing it’s going to be one of the last times I’ll ever get to do it.

Just a few minutes later, I’m standing outside the door as the clouds roll in, waiting for another Uber driver to arrive. It’s taking everything in me to keep me from crying again. Everyone gives me hugs as they say goodbye, and I realize I’m going to miss them, too.

Even Jasmine hugs me like she doesn’t want to let me go.

“Um — thanks for letting me into your crazy family,” I tell them, feeling like I should make a goodbye speech or something. “You guys are nice. Thanks for taking care of Taryn. Please continue to do that.”

Cécile nods, swiping her eyes, too. “We’ll miss you, Del.”

I smile at her, then turn away quickly when I feel the tears coming on. At the sight of a car pulling up to the driveway, my stomach tightens. This is goodbye.

“Del!” Taryn cries as I begin walking down the sidewalk.

I turn toward her. Taryn cries again as she runs to me, and we both hug each other for a long, long time.

When I finally pull away, I blink back my tears and stumble back, not wanting to let her out of my sight but forcing myself to turn toward the car.

And all too soon, I’m running toward it, far, far away from her.

I realize I’m still holding the Bible under my arm, and my grip on it tightens. I’ve said nothing good about God my entire life, but I sure need Someone right now.

Would God really help me keep my head up, or would He help my sister instead? I blink my eyes, not sure if I’m trying to keep from crying or am going to close them and say my own prayer.

Please help Taryn. And I know You probably don’t like me because of what I’ve said about You, but if You have a little help left, please help me, too.

To be continued… in Heads Up – Part Six!

You knew a cliffhanger was coming, didn’t you? ?

Part six coming up soon — as well as a ton of other exciting posts like ONE ABOUT MEETING THE EPIC CHLOE FROM MY HOBBIT HOLE AT THE AMERICAN GIRL STORE! AHH DELANEY LOVED IT AND IT WAS MY FIRST TIME MEETING AN ONLINE FRIEND OH MY WORD. *dies*

AND IT DOESN’T STOP THERE. THEN THERE’S ONE ABOUT MEETING THE PHENOMENAL LIGHT4THELORD FROM DOLLS N’ ALL AT THE AMERICAN GIRL STORE AND DOING A BIG COLOSSAL EPIC PHOTOSHOOT MASHUP WITH HER DOLLS AND MY DOLLS! *dies again* I even got to take a picture with her camera. ?

Ahem.

If you’re looking forward to part six, let the dolls know! (Because they have to cooperate and you encouraging them helps.) Just hit “like” and leave a comment below!

Much love and I’m praying for you! 

By | 2017-07-12T20:27:19+00:00 July 12th, 2017|All, Photostories|76 Comments

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Madison
Hey! I'm Madi, a blogger, writer, doll collector, & minister of the Gospel of Jesus Christ. You can learn more about me by clicking here and more about this blog by clicking here.

76 Comments

  1. Olive July 12, 2017 at 8:41 pm - Reply

    Eh, that wasn’t really a cliffhanger, just heartbreaking. ? THEY LOOK SO SAD.
    That phone call sounded like something I would do though. ? Finally, something me and del have in common! I also think it amusing how dolls always hold their phones with their elbows. It’s like they dared each other to see how many times they can make calls without using their hands, and nobody wants to lose. ?
    Most crazily,~Olive

    • Madison
      Madison July 13, 2017 at 3:07 pm - Reply

      LOL! Aw, yeah. ? LOLOL! You must be so funny XD Wait, actually, you ARE funny. XD

      And LOL! I know, right? It’s ’cause they can’t bend their elbows so… XD LOLOL! ??

  2. M&M July 12, 2017 at 8:43 pm - Reply

    WHY!? EVERYTIME! CLIFFHANGERS!!! JUST POST THE WHOLE SERIES PLEASE! I CANT WAIT ANY LONGER!

    As you can see I am very exited about the next part!

    M&M-

    • Madison
      Madison July 13, 2017 at 3:09 pm - Reply

      MWAHAHAAAAA! Well, I can’t post the whole series at once because that would be too long and no one would read it. And if there were no cliffhangers, no one would be looking forward to the next part and they’d lose interest. SO SORRY. CLIFHANGERS IS HOW I KEEP YOU ALL IN SUSPENSE. ? Jk.

      Hehe! I’m glad! ?

  3. Tess July 12, 2017 at 9:07 pm - Reply

    PART SIX PART SIX PART SIX!
    You never cease to amaze me with your ability to put religion into posts without it being cheesy. You’re a huge inspiration to me, and I hope you know that. So much that I’m considering doing something like it myself.
    Love you so much, girl, keep up the good work!
    {Tess}

    • Madison
      Madison July 13, 2017 at 3:11 pm - Reply

      YAY YAY YAY IT’S A COMIN’ SOON!

      And AWWWWW! You literally just made my day so much! That seriously blesses me to no end! You are so sweet and awesome! Jesus is amazing — all I wanna do is glorify Him through what I do!

      Love you so much too! Thank you SO much for commenting! :’)

  4. Diamond July 12, 2017 at 9:12 pm - Reply

    *Heart stops* *Starts crying**It must mean….HEAD”S UP IS POSTED!!???!!?!?!!*
    So many mixed emotions right now. That. was. amazing. You seriously need to post the next part before I die of not knowing. This was so sad. I would say something about how exciting those meetups sound, but I’m too much in awe on Head’s Up. Your writing is incredible. I can actually feel the emotions along with the dolls. I can’t believe it. I can’t get over your awesome writing.

    Diamond
    worldofagdolls.blogspot.com

    • Madison
      Madison July 13, 2017 at 3:14 pm - Reply

      YES YES HEADS UP IS HEEEERE!

      And oh. My. Goodness. DIAMOND YOU ARE SO INCREDIBLY NICE OH MY WORD. I don’t even know what to say, that literally means SO much to me! You’re so kind! It blesses me so much to know you like my photostories and writing! :’) Thank you so much! :’)

      • Diamond July 13, 2017 at 8:17 pm - Reply

        You’re welcome! I’m glad that I made you so happy! That makes me happy!

        Diamond

        • Madison
          Madison July 14, 2017 at 12:20 pm - Reply

          Awww, I like making people happy too! 😀

  5. Chloe July 12, 2017 at 9:21 pm - Reply

    Awwwwwwwww, this was so sweet!!!! I can’t wait for the next part!!! Ahh, meeting you was SO. MUCH. FUN!

    • Madison
      Madison July 13, 2017 at 3:15 pm - Reply

      Awwwww yay!! Part six coming up soon! AND OH MY GOODNESS IT TOTALLY WAS! ?❤️

  6. Christian Homeschooler July 12, 2017 at 9:44 pm - Reply

    Oh, poor Delany and Taryn…and the rest of the dolls too. 🙁 I’m totally looking forward to part six! I bet it’s going to be exciting. 🙂
    ~Christian Homeschooler

    • Madison
      Madison July 13, 2017 at 3:16 pm - Reply

      Awwww, I know right ? Thank you so much! I hope you’ll like it! ?

  7. ThePolkaDotPatriot July 13, 2017 at 12:04 am - Reply

    This was great! Ugh, another cliffhanger, though. 😉

    • Madison
      Madison July 13, 2017 at 3:17 pm - Reply

      Thanks so much! Hehehe. ??

  8. Molly July 13, 2017 at 12:20 am - Reply

    Do part 6 NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I hate hate HATE your cliffhangers Madi!!!
    And I LOVED part 6. It made get all teary. Truly!????????????

    • Madison
      Madison July 13, 2017 at 3:19 pm - Reply

      MWAHAHAHA DO NOT WORRY IT’S COMING SOON! Sorry but cliffhangers are life. ? Jk. And awwwwwwwwwwww! ? I’m so glad you’re looking forward to part six! ☺️

  9. Light4theLord July 13, 2017 at 9:03 am - Reply

    OHMYGOODNESS! I LOVED IT SO MUCH! (even though I already knew what was happening, the photos were amazzzzing!!!!!! Oh, and um…. hurry up with part 6! I’m never satisfied!!!!! XD)
    Delaney. Poor Delaney and Taryn *sobs for them*
    ~ LIght4theLord
    https://dollsnall.blogspot.com
    (I LOVED MEETING YOU SO MUCH!! I’m TOTALLY going to work on the post today… or tomorrow, depending on how much procrastinating I want to practice this weekend)

    • Madison
      Madison July 13, 2017 at 3:22 pm - Reply

      AWWWWWW THANK YOU!! (Hehehe! Aww, I’m glad you liked the photos! The lighting definitely isn’t the greatest, lol ?) AND OKAY OKAY PART SOX COMING SOON. XD And I knowwwww! They’re so sad! ?

      (AND YES! THAT WAS SO EPIC AND AMAZING!! And LOL! ? I need to get that post up soon too!)

  10. Jewel July 13, 2017 at 9:05 am - Reply

    SO SO cute! That close up with Del, and the tears coming down really gets you in the heart! I LOVE Del! LOL
    Today I put up a photo story as well! http://www.dollnotebook.com/blogs/. You did a great job!

    -Jewel

  11. Allison July 13, 2017 at 9:32 am - Reply

    WHOOOOOAAA that was great, Madison! Didn’t see that one coming. 🙂 Can’t wait to see what happens next!

    • Madison
      Madison July 13, 2017 at 3:26 pm - Reply

      Aw, thanks SO much! ? You’re so nice! ☺️ Thanks for commenting! ☺️

  12. Maddie July 13, 2017 at 10:30 am - Reply

    *gapes* *gapes some more* Uh did I really just witness that? Apparently so. I’m stunned. DEL CAN’T JUST LEAVE LIKE THAT! *breaks down* *sobs* *wails* POOR TARYN!! I MUST HAVE PART 6!!! But really that was a very emotional chapter. So touching! I loved it, BUT AT THE SAME TIME…..*goes on knees* *starts pouring down rain* *lifts face to the sky* WHY?!?!?!? *thunder*

    HAHA XD hehe I’m so random 😛

    • Madison
      Madison July 13, 2017 at 3:29 pm - Reply

      *gapes with Maddie* WHY YES YES YES YOU DID! MWAHAHA! *sobs with Maddie* I KNOWWW! That’s why there’s a part six. ? AWW THANKS! I’m glad you liked it!

      *plays the super dramatically sad music*

      Don’t worry. I’m random, too.

      ?

  13. Lucky July 13, 2017 at 10:39 am - Reply

    This is so good, Madi!
    I feel so bad for Delaney, getting pulled away from her sister yet again, but nevertheless its a good way to keep the reader hooked!
    -Lucky

    • Madison
      Madison July 13, 2017 at 3:30 pm - Reply

      Aww, I’m so glad you liked it!

      Me too! And YES, exactly. ? Otherwise no one would want to read the next part. *shrugging emoji*

  14. Anonymous July 13, 2017 at 2:06 pm - Reply

    Oh, man! That was so mean! Cliffhangers. Humph. Well, PUH LEASE CONTINUE!!!! I can’t stand it!
    Annecy ??

    • Madison
      Madison July 13, 2017 at 3:31 pm - Reply

      MWAHAHAHAHAAA! ? Don’t worry! Part six is coming soon! ?

  15. Rose July 13, 2017 at 2:13 pm - Reply

    WHY THE CLIFFHANGERS! WHY! I thought you liked us Madison… JK! Lovely photos as well!
    -Rose <3

    • Madison
      Madison July 13, 2017 at 3:39 pm - Reply

      MWAHAHA! Because then no one would want to read the next part! ? Awwwww, you’re so nice! I’m glad you like them! ?

  16. Sara????? July 13, 2017 at 3:03 pm - Reply

    That’s so sad! I wonder what will happen to Delaney!!! I can’t wait for part six! And of course I knew you were going to do another cliffhanger! ????? that’s so COOL! LOLOL I am very excited to see you! AGAIN! It’s been literally almost a whole year since I’ve seen you! You know how last time there was only one car six people a cat and a rabbit! Now my other cousin is comeing we are having a truck a car 7 people a dog, cat, and a rabbit! And we are driving to Florida from Oregon in just 3-4 days Only one HOTEL! Lol ugggggggg??? but it’s definitely WORTH IT! Lol how are you doing????

    • Madison
      Madison July 13, 2017 at 3:45 pm - Reply

      Awwww I know right! Part six coming soon!

      AND YAAAAAY! I can’t wait to see you! And OH MY GOSH THAT’S A LOT. ??? Can’t wait to see you! I’ve been doing great!

      • SARA?????? July 14, 2017 at 4:59 am - Reply

        LOL!☺? IKR! Tell me about it alot people alot of work! That’s great that you’ve been doing great! I’m good! It’s just the only thing that I hate right now is the dumb bee sting I got yesterday from a yellow jacket I’ll tell you one thing they are not nice and they HURT! lol??

        • Madison
          Madison July 14, 2017 at 12:30 pm - Reply

          OUCH! That sounds so painful! Oh my gosh, I’m so sorry for you! I’ve never gotten a bee sting in my life (and hope I never do XD) I can’t even imagine how irritatingly painful that must be. XD Ugh, I’m so sorry for you. XD I hope it feels better!

          • Sara July 14, 2017 at 1:35 pm - Reply

            Wow really your 14 and in 12 guess how many bee stings Ive had in my life!! Have a random guess! Wow trust me you don’t ever ever EVER want to have a bee sting and by the way I’m allergic to them so my whole leg is swollen becouse of it it sucks! They hurt so be careful XD XD XD

            • Madison
              Madison July 19, 2017 at 4:11 pm - Reply

              Ummm five? Six? XD Ugh ouch! I will! XDD

              • Sara July 20, 2017 at 11:32 am - Reply

                Nope! 200-250 becouse when I was little me and my brother where in a blue berries patch and I was 3 with my dad and my brother was 2 with my mom and my other Brother wasn’t born yet and me and my dad where allergic to them OUCH I CAN REMEMBER THE PAIN!!

                • Madison
                  Madison July 27, 2017 at 4:41 pm - Reply

                  Oh my gosh! ? PAINFUL. SO SORRY YOU HAD TO GO THROUGH THAT.

          • Sara July 19, 2017 at 2:35 pm - Reply

            Oh! Yeah! Guess what!!!?

            • Madison
              Madison July 28, 2017 at 4:24 am - Reply

              What?? 😀

              • Sara August 11, 2017 at 1:31 pm - Reply

                Did you know your AWWWWSOMEEEE LOL what are you doing today?

                • Madison
                  Madison August 11, 2017 at 4:59 pm - Reply

                  AWWW YOU TOO!! LOL busy with school bleh. XD

  17. Olivia Bell (aka Livy) July 13, 2017 at 4:33 pm - Reply

    This was so cliff hanger-y!! AHHH!!! WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!?!? Poor Del and Taryn… *cries a puddle*
    How exciting that you got to meet two online friends! That’s amazing! 😀 I know you had/will have fun!
    Have you checked your PO box lately? 😉

    • Madison
      Madison July 14, 2017 at 12:15 pm - Reply

      AHHHH YAY FOR CLIFFHANGERS! And I know right… *sniffs*

      It was so exciting! I really hope I can meet more of my online friends! 😀

      OH MY GOODNESS YES I HAVE IN FACT I SENT YOU AN EMAIL ABOUT THAT! ?❤️

  18. The AG Homeschooler July 13, 2017 at 6:48 pm - Reply

    Love it!!!! Can’t wait to see what happens next!!

    • Madison
      Madison July 14, 2017 at 12:15 pm - Reply

      Aww I’m so glad you like it!! Part six coming soon! 😀

  19. Natalie@TheAGSpot July 13, 2017 at 7:10 pm - Reply

    *Sobs* I agree that this wasn’t really a cliffhanger, but just incredibly heartbreaking. MADI, GIRL, HOW DO YOU DO THAT??????????? That phone call sounds exactly like one I had once. This is just a wildly random guess, but this is what I think will happen; Delaney was adopted by Madison’s older sister, who is planning to give her to Madison. Random, wild guess.

    ~Natalie@TheAGspot

    • Madison
      Madison July 14, 2017 at 12:19 pm - Reply

      Yay for heartbreakingness. >:D MWAHAHAHAAAAAAA! And LOLOLOL! Really? Wow!

      AND OOOH. That’s a super cool guess. I guess you’ll just have to WAIT IN SUSPENSE AND SEE! >:D

      XD Thanks so much for commenting, Natalie!

      • Natalie@TheAGSpot July 14, 2017 at 5:19 pm - Reply

        Totally-I must admit, I do like it when it gets heart-wrenching. Really! A (former) friend of mine did something really mean, and she called to say she was ”sorry”, and I just about lost it….not very Christian of me I guess.

        GAH! MADISON YOU ARE SO CRUEL!!!

        ~Natalie@TheAGSpot

        • Madison
          Madison July 19, 2017 at 4:16 pm - Reply

          Me too! XD Awwwww! That’s so sad! :'(

          MWAHAHAHA. I KNOW, NATALIE. I KNOW.

  20. Rebcake July 13, 2017 at 8:31 pm - Reply

    The minute I saw this post in my Reader I literally whispered “yessss” out loud. XD
    No. Wait. Just no.
    MADI!!! YOU ARE THE CRUELEST HUMAN BEING ON EARTH!! You are not my friend anymore! You — you — you!! How could you just…just let Del leave like that? How could you?
    But honestly, I got a lump in my throat when I was rereading this for like, the third time. Taryn hugging her sis <3 <3 <3 *sobs passionately* *uses up two boxes of Kleenex* and even Jasmine hugged her. *dies some more* KEEP YOUR HEAD UP GUYS YOU'LL BE OKAY…I hope. As long as Miss Dramatic Madi doesn't make up more heart-wrenching twists to the story…SEND ME THE MANUSCRIPT OR SOMETHING, LEST I DIE. *cries* I can't even imagine being torn away from MY sister…*sobs some more*
    Also, like Tess said, I really admire how you can put Christianity in photo stories without making it sound really cheesy…that's awesome!
    Can I just say I like making long and wacky comments?
    ~Rebekah | Stuffie Adventures

    • Madison
      Madison July 14, 2017 at 12:27 pm - Reply

      gasp dude really YAY that makes me so happy XD

      Yes. No waiting. Just yes.

      MWAHAHAHAAAAAAA! >:D SUFFER AT THE HAND OF MY EVILNESS! >:D

      And AWWWWWW! Really? THAT MEANS MY DRAMATICNESS HAS MOVED YOU?! AWWW! XD *passes you more Kleenex* MWAHAHAHA. NO SPOILERS. SORRY. NOPE. ZILCH. NADA. MWAHAHAAA!

      And right?! I couldn’t even imagine it either! I got super sad at one part while writing it out. XD

      And awwwwwwwww, thanks! I really love showing His love though my stuff. Jesus is awesome! ?

      Can I just say I LOVE your comments? 😀

  21. Gracie July 13, 2017 at 9:21 pm - Reply

    What an exciting (and sad) part! I look forward to part six!!
    ~Gracie

    • Madison
      Madison July 14, 2017 at 12:28 pm - Reply

      Aww yay! I can’t wait to post part six! Thanks for commenting! 😀

  22. Kendall July 14, 2017 at 3:24 pm - Reply

    Great post!! I’m so excited! <3 I really love Taryn. 🙂

    • Madison
      Madison July 19, 2017 at 4:12 pm - Reply

      Thank you so much! Aw, me too. 😀

  23. Hope Hyink July 14, 2017 at 6:41 pm - Reply

    Wow!
    I really Like this series.
    I can’t imagine what will happen next.

    • Madison
      Madison July 27, 2017 at 4:21 pm - Reply

      I’m so glad you do! I can’t wait to post part six!

  24. JR.JEANSK8 July 15, 2017 at 9:51 am - Reply

    Maddi! If you really get rid of Delaney, I am going to scream!

  25. SARA?????? July 17, 2017 at 6:03 pm - Reply

    P.s this is so sweet! But sad! And exciting! lol Can’t wait for part six!!

    • Madison
      Madison July 28, 2017 at 4:23 am - Reply

      Awww yay! I can’t wait to post it! 😀

  26. Xyra July 19, 2017 at 2:04 pm - Reply

    Ooo, very intereting. I feel for Del, but am looking to find out more of the story.
    PS. You have great photography skills!

    • Madison
      Madison July 28, 2017 at 4:24 am - Reply

      I can’t wait to post part six! … once I figure out the rest of the story, that is, haha…

      P.S. Awww, I’m so glad you like them!

  27. Sara????? July 27, 2017 at 5:35 pm - Reply

    Hi madison! Guess what are you there?

    • Madison
      Madison July 28, 2017 at 4:56 am - Reply

      Hey! What’s up?

      • Sara July 28, 2017 at 5:13 am - Reply

        Hey I arrived at this church yesterday morning and went to kids club last night it took 5 days non stop driving lol Can’t wait to see you!

        • Madison
          Madison July 30, 2017 at 3:53 pm - Reply

          It was so awesome to see you! I don’t know if I can see you again before I go to youth camp, but I come back home on August 4th! 😀

          • Sara July 30, 2017 at 5:44 pm - Reply

            Ok that’s not so far away can’t wait to see you again are you coming to church tonight? If not that’s fine but can’t wait to see you! We NEED to have a playdate

            • Madison
              Madison August 6, 2017 at 10:13 am - Reply

              I’m going to youth service tonight! We do!

  28. molly July 30, 2017 at 4:54 am - Reply

    waiting….waiting…….waiting………….
    FOR U TO DO THE NEXT PART MADI!!!!!!
    THIS IS LIKE THE 553358975321146th TIME I’VE EVEN READ IT!!!!!!!!
    SO HURRY UP!!!! GOT IT!? GOOOOOOD! ABOUT TIME! (i luuuuuuuuuurve caps XD)
    – me

    • Madison
      Madison July 30, 2017 at 3:59 pm - Reply

      LOLOL sorryyy. XD Haha me too. XD IT’S COMING SOON… KINDA… SORTA… MAYBE… okay, sigh. It’ll be a while.

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